Stanpai's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DJ GRAY Trailer]

Huge Ko Takeuchi vibes in your style. Love this promo! I suggest putting some more into the lip sync, but beyond that this is a winner!

[Rogue Robots]

I remember auditioning for this project! So glad to see this finished product, it looks fantastic! I must admit I miss the Cagney Carnation tune, but your current OST does a nice job. Cartoon came out terrific!

[bean stories 1]

I remember when made movies like this when I was a little kid. My advice is to keep practicing and learning. Eventaully, you'll be ready for the portal. Don't give up!

[Idea!]

Instead of uploading this as a vlog on the movie portal, you should post this as a blog on your account. The movie portal is for cartoons and animations, rather than vlogs and personal video.

Wonder9 responds:

Thank you for the advice

[Kirby 💖]

Cute, but I'd say this needs more effort and substance to be a good fit for the movie portal.

[We Do a Little Crashing]

Terrific job for your first animation ever!! Nice accomplishment, Trav! Keep pushing to improve, this is an awesome start.

[Friday night hunkin': M.I.L.F.]

Definitely a step in the right direction. There's a lot more going on in this. Certain choices were strange but overall I find this to be a funny continuation of this hunkin' plot. I think you should cut back on some of the 2-frame animations like when Mom's eyebrow was going lightspeed, somewhat painful on the eyes. The frame blending also did not do you any favors, as it got staticy around the 30 second point. Keep going further!

[Evil Academy For Evil Sorcerers]

Mouth movements are very out of sync which brings the quality down. I also would suggest picking up some voice actors for your future projects to add some spice to the production- plenty of whom can be found right here on the site.

That said I liked this and hope to see more from you in the future! When you don't have to rush, you can really take the time to fix things like your audio desyncing, because I could see you did animate the mouths proper. You can update this cartoon or upload a better version later!

FungalDespair responds:

Thanks dude, really appreciated!

Yeah I'd love to redo this animation, but with more time put into it. With finding people to voice act, timing the overall short better and whatnot! - again, thanks dude!

[PEN PUSHER]

Welcome to the portal! Loved the animation. Keep up the great work.

[Procrastination]

SALAMAAT PAGI!