Belongs in the Art Portal. Beautiful model.
Belongs in the Art Portal. Beautiful model.
Some cute humor, really liked a number of the gags, but I feel the backgrounds were too minimalist and the animation, even if parodying someone else's style, was rather rough when coupled with already very simple drawings. I'd suggest prioritizing the art or the animation for future uploads and you'll have a winning formula.
Thanks for the critique, I'll keep that in mind if I end up making a part 2!
Don't get me wrong, I absolutely adore this submission, but because it has such little substance, I feel it doesn't deserve more than 1.5 stars. I love your style and think this would be a very good transition shot during a full length cartoon. Alone, it is more appropriate for the Art portal.
Huge Ko Takeuchi vibes in your style. Love this promo! I suggest putting some more into the lip sync, but beyond that this is a winner!
I remember auditioning for this project! So glad to see this finished product, it looks fantastic! I must admit I miss the Cagney Carnation tune, but your current OST does a nice job. Cartoon came out terrific!
Terrific job for your first animation ever!! Nice accomplishment, Trav! Keep pushing to improve, this is an awesome start.
Definitely a step in the right direction. There's a lot more going on in this. Certain choices were strange but overall I find this to be a funny continuation of this hunkin' plot. I think you should cut back on some of the 2-frame animations like when Mom's eyebrow was going lightspeed, somewhat painful on the eyes. The frame blending also did not do you any favors, as it got staticy around the 30 second point. Keep going further!
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